I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello everyone today I am posting a blog on my blog post and it's about tiktok can you please give me some feedback what i can do next time i do it again.
Hello everyone today I am posting a blog on my blog post and it's about tiktok can you please give me some feedback what i can do next time i do it again. 
Next time you can make your story make sence. But I do like tiktok
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