One day i was walking on the grass, then the clouds went gray and I heard the ground shaking.
So i went to my house then everyone was running and screaming loud then i saw a big big wave. On the land so I started running as fast to get home. And get my family then I heard a siren. I ran so so fast then I made it home. But they weren't there then the wave hit the house.
And it pushed me to the kitchen and I passed out then I woke up on the top room. I saw a boat on the top of the tsunami. So i went up to the top top roof of the house then i jumped off the roof and got on the boat. Then I went to look around for my family. It take me 1 hour to look for them. I found my sister. In a big tree so i swim-ed to her to get my sister down she was crying for mum. So we went to find are brother and mum and dad then we both went to look for mum and dad then I found them. The End.
Great story Makayla.
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to believe that we have events like this in the world.I would dread to be around if a tsunami hit our coast.
Just remember that when we write the word 'I' it needs to be a capital letter.
I will do capital letters next time i do a story.
Deletewow makayla i think this is really good, i like how you said there was a siren. i think you could have written wee bit more what happened after found your family, when did the tsunami stop. good job
ReplyDeleteHello Makayla.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.