I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
What I really like about your portrait Makayla is the way that you have left some of your face blank.I can still work out your features as you have placed words in those areas.I think this is a lovely piece of work that shares information about you. Maybe next time you could change the turquoise colour as there are lots of the same coloured words next to each other,which makes it hard to read.or Scatter them more around the object you are working on.
What I really like about your portrait Makayla is the way that you have left some of your face blank.I can still work out your features as you have placed words in those areas.I think this is a lovely piece of work that shares information about you.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could change the turquoise colour as there are lots of the same coloured words next to each other,which makes it hard to read.or Scatter them more around the object you are working on.